WALT edit and improve a twisted tale
Read your story from yesterday and see if you can make any improvements.
It would be useful to go through the success criteria below to make sure you have included everything we have asked you to.
(verbs, adjectives, adverbs, conjunctions, fronted adverbials, inverted commas, commas)
Use this online thesaurus to see if you can up-level some of your words.
Make your changes using a blue for better pen if you have one
This week we are learning all about The Bible.
Have a look at the Powerpoint below and then have a go at the activity.
WALT add money